Aasman ko choone ki tamanna thi itni
Unko paane ki tammanna thi itni
Ki gardish mein bhi khone se nahi dare
Aur aankhon mein unki tasveer lekar bas chal diye
Hazaaron khwahishein bas dil mein lekar chal diye
Socha ki bas ab mil gaya
Baahon mein baahein daal kar chal diye
Par masoomiyat thi itni, ki kahin raah mein bhool gaye,
Ki raaste itne bhi aasan nahi,
Aur gardish mein shayad kahin who bhi kho gaye….
13 comments:
wow!....you wrote these lines? or are they from a song??
Gardish ko gardish is liye kaha jaata hai,
Kyunki jis jahan mein hum jo khote hain,
Us hi jahan mein hum kuch paate bhi hain
If this is your original work, I'll be your slave for life!
Cheers!
and here i thought i could never witness the birth of an artist ... you are dabbling well in poetry, short stories and god before we know it we'll find u sitting in a book store signing autographs to glory !!!
@ PJ
Yeah I wrote them!!!! Myself.
@ I
Par gardish mein woh kuch aise kho gaye ki
khudko hi paana ek mushkil sa karwa ban gaya...
Yes I wrote them. Original work! :-)
Thanks for liking it!!
@ Nutees
I am so flattered! But I somehow always felt that I cant write poetry! And yeah when it comes to signing autographs....I hope whatever you say will come true one day! ;-)
Thank you!
just too good!!!
surely need a Tubash (translator!)
Mushkil lagta hai... lagega... kyunki mushkil lagna uski fitrat mein hota hai
How else will the final outcome be rendered sweet?
Slave, I am, btw. Shall I belly-dance for you? ;)
@ PJ
Thank ye!
@ Arvind
Then the magic will be lost!!
@ I
You can belly dance? :-p
Post a Comment